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    Sig for my friend Brian =]

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    Text is too broad, it catches my eye too quickly and steals my focus from the render which should be your main point of focus. There are a few other things that are keeping me from looking where I should be..

    The render has a texture or C4D over it that just makes it part of your background, this gives your sig a flat feeling. So as you can imagine I'm going to say you need better depth.

    Also the placement of your intended focus point is located directly in the center which is not a generally appealing place for the eyes to first look. Google "The rule of thirds".

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    i'd love to critic some more than [MPGH]Ryguy but he pretty much hit it all.
    braod text, too much colour mess up ...
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    Ryguy got it all.
    depth. color. and render placement.
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    So flat!
    Never put Effect C4D over the render. And the text is too, too bright.
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    Thanks everyone

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spawnsor View Post
    Thanks everyone

    My photoshop was lagging that I couldn't even erase So I was like "Screw it."
    CS5 = no lag.
    no lag = profit $$$$$$.

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    V 1 where acctually Very Nice! Keep it up, and just work with ur depth.. test with and without.. what you think is best.. play around a bit and try to smudge abit and difrent settings and effects..

    Quote Originally Posted by killakid'sBakUpAcc View Post
    Ryguy got it all.
    depth. color. and render placement.
    @killakid'sBakUpAcc try to read this thread. http://www.mpgh.net/forum/148-showro...e-section.html
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    Quote Originally Posted by lilleanders View Post
    V 1 where acctually Very Nice! Keep it up, and just work with ur depth.. test with and without.. what you think is best.. play around a bit and try to smudge abit and difrent settings and effects..



    @killakid'sBakUpAcc try to read this thread. http://www.mpgh.net/forum/148-showro...e-section.html
    basically you're telling me i didnt giv constructive criticism.
    no use in re-typing EVERYTHING that someone already stated.
    just telling him that those are the things that are most noticeable, and needs work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by killakid'sBakUpAcc View Post


    basically you're telling me i didnt giv constructive criticism.
    no use in re-typing EVERYTHING that someone already stated.
    just telling him that those are the things that are most noticeable, and needs work.
    maybe he whant's to have Constructive Criticism from more than one guy. so he knows hes doing right in more than just Two eyes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by lilleanders View Post
    maybe he whant's to have Constructive Criticism from more than one guy. so he knows hes doing right in more than just Two eyes.
    once again, not gonna re-type everything ryguy already put.
    if people agree upon it, then he knows what he needs to work on.
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    Quote Originally Posted by killakid'sBakUpAcc View Post


    once again, not gonna re-type everything ryguy already put.
    if people agree upon it, then he knows what he needs to work on.
    That's when I just hit the thanks button on the post that said exactly what I was going to say and then just move on to the next thread.