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    Exclamation CnC -- NinjaApocolypse

    Not my best work. There is just something about my pieces that I am missing and can't seem to grasp. But, I don't know how to describe what it is. Anyone have any advice for a V2?



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    It looks okey.

    maybe make the "man" a bit less visible.
    So it go with the image.

     
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    Needs better depth and lighting. There is also a lot of empty space on the right that is kind of distracting.

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    aight. made a V2. Mostly off of ryguy and own judgement

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    Still lots of empty.
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    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    Emptyyyyyy. And why'd you put Statue of Liberty on 15% opacity?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post
    Emptyyyyyy. And why'd you put Statue of Liberty on 15% opacity?
    well the theme is burning NYC so... i thought it would fill more space

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    Doesn't look like much changed. It's hard to explain what to do here but basically I would take some stuff out to make it less messy looking and maybe add some fire or something in there and make the flames be the primary light source.

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    Well, V2 is more colorful, it's more nice.

    But that doesn't mean your sig is nice.


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    Not really my style :/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Izaya View Post
    Not really my style :/
    @Izaya Then don't comment on it if you can't CnC it.
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    made a v3 anything else to make it better?

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    Ah not to be mean but V1 is still the best IMO. Perhaps addin a gradient map or a photo filter above that and then sharpen a little bit would solve it. but before that, put a c4d or a vector or sth that fits in tha sky, so the sig becomes less empty. I think this might improve a bit but this is just me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt View Post


    @Izaya Then don't comment on it if you can't CnC it.
    Ur one to talk.

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    Ur one to talk.
    Nice one x3

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