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    i find tuts hard to follow.

    i really do. they look nothing as good as what i thought would be made.




    no text







    tell me what i need to work on, so i can make v2.

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    it's a good start. Remove the borders. The v2 is better because the text doesn't fit. Maybe it's even too dark in the dges...
     

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    It isn't that bad. Just try and get a slightly more centered focal. Less sharpening would also help.

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    It's actually really good...... fucking shit. watch the focus and the rule of thirds.

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    For me tuts aren't really about making an outcome that looks good (it usually doesn't). Tutorials are mostly about learning new techniques, new little details to add to your own style you wouldn't have come up with on your own. So yeah, outcomes look crappy, but that's normal since it's your first time in a new style / technique.

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    Quote Originally Posted by artemon View Post
    For me tuts aren't really about making an outcome that looks good (it usually doesn't). Tutorials are mostly about learning new techniques, new little details to add to your own style you wouldn't have come up with on your own. So yeah, outcomes look crappy, but that's normal since it's your first time in a new style / technique.

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    i know. if i try to make my own tho, i wouldn't know where to start.
    so i just follow tuts and post my outcome.

    will try and fix the darkness. and the sharpening.

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    better than mine.
    lol.

    Thanks Wudge Alt 2.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Assassin Creed View Post
    better than mine.
    lol.
    dude, you've been posting on the threads in here, and its not even constructive criticism. get out.