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    Abstract LP again fosho'



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    stop making sigs, make these. Makes you look pro.

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    It has a nice flow, but the gray tints and the randomness of the pentooling makes it unattractive for me.


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    wait,....what is it?

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    Far too much negative space, and bear in mind greyscale doesn't tend to work too well with abstracts like this. Go all out in colour and get some more 3D work in there, otherwise it just ends up looking very flat.
    Also, try not to position the render dead centre.

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    Good Flow.
    but its just brushs, i could do this, and ive never been able to do something as boss as you signature why's that is

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    Quote Originally Posted by AdamBoon View Post
    Far too much negative space, and bear in mind greyscale doesn't tend to work too well with abstracts like this. Go all out in colour and get some more 3D work in there, otherwise it just ends up looking very flat.
    Also, try not to position the render dead centre.
    That's not a render... And centered positioning doesn't apply to LPs.


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    what should that beeee?
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    Quote Originally Posted by artemon View Post


    That's not a render... And centered positioning doesn't apply to LPs.
    FYI: Composition techniques apply to everything.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Bass. View Post
    Good Flow.
    but its just brushs, i could do this, and ive never been able to do something as boss as you signature why's that is
    Brushes? Really I thought they where pentooled shapes specifically over 200 shapes

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    sorry, i mean it looks amazing but i like your other work/.

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    Thanks guys
    Really I was just practicing my pentooling and this was in color but then I added a gradient map to it and i thought it looked better
    Yes it is flat I'm going to start adding gradients and using different tones of the same color to make a better depth

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    Didn't read anything exept Parade's first comment and I completely agree with it. Make more of these.
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    I would add something else to it, probably washed out purples and greens. I mean really washed out.
    Some sort of effect pentooling with those colors, or maybe with reds and yellows. Reds and yellows wouldn't need to be as washed out.
    These are great, but they're base shapes.
    Also, make something in the bg. Maybe an angle gradient. Easy, but filling.