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    Spidey Swinger

    Spidey Swinger First:



    Spidey Swinger Update 3 v4:


    *Note that i did the first one improved to 2nd then to 3rd etc between the first few big change then lesser then little things :P

    CNC tell me how to improve, i need to do something with the fluttered lighting i know that
    i need help in making this look good .. for example: to make a mini-tag for it to make it look kinda professional and i also need to add some C4D so some advanced detailed explanations would be nice

    add as much detail as possible, don't just say lighting or blend use DETAIL

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    There is some depth, but barely any effects. You didn't blend the white brushes enough. You could've had put some C4D or something so that the right side doesn't look so empty.
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    Don't mention people.

    Too much blur and I would suggest some adjustment layers. Not a fan of the red/blue.

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    The image itself is already too LQ to work with..

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    The white and red brushes look very plain but I like the flow of the brushes. Use c4ds instead.

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    ok guys i took al this into my view and i see this is pretty good but neeeds improvement , so i improved it, tell me how to fix it/ undo fixes that make it look worse ...
    if u want the psd to look at to help ask and i'll pm u media fire link ...
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    i believe i fixed these things in edit number 3 i also posted this ona gFX forum and someone commented about #2's text so i changed it

    Parade you wanted a C4D in place of brushes so i lowed those extremely and added a C4d

    Faux you said it was too LQ so i enhanced it a little by sharpening :P

    Ryguy you said not to mention people ( i use it to let them know my updates) and i blended spidey in some more with update 3 by adding a layer under and above him of the same color then to not over do red i added a C4D to make it flow better

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    Quote Originally Posted by gamerboy667 View Post
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    i believe i fixed these things in edit number 3 i also posted this ona gFX forum and someone commented about #2's text so i changed it

    Parade you wanted a C4D in place of brushes so i lowed those extremely and added a C4d

    Faux you said it was too LQ so i enhanced it a little by sharpening :P

    Ryguy you said not to mention people ( i use it to let them know my updates) and i blended spidey in some more with update 3 by adding a layer under and above him of the same color then to not over do red i added a C4D to make it flow better

    Thats actually much better than the original.

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    Brighten the sig up and put the text a little to the right and you'll make a sexy sig.

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    @Faux Thank you for that, ( i hit the button) and i'm pretty sure thats the purpose of updating them is to improve no?

    @Parade the left i see does need a touch of light but not much and i can/will move it over just for you :P eve though it looks like it is floating ing space alone over if it is moved but wtv

    Spidey Swinger 3 v2:
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    Quote Originally Posted by gamerboy667 View Post
    @Faux Thank you for that, ( i hit the button) and i'm pretty sure thats the purpose of updating them is to improve no?

    @Parade the left i see does need a touch of light but not much and i can/will move it over just for you :P eve though it looks like it is floating ing space alone over if it is moved but wtv

    Spidey Swinger 3 v2:
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    I dunno if it's just me, but is the stock LQ?
    Flow is good. Like this one a lot better then the original.
    Text is bleh.

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    text is always blah for this particular work for some reason and i don't know why, i tried it red/blue and i got a comment about it from someone (not on this thread) and it looks bad because of its complex and colors and stuff even though the font is really nice ...
    the C4D is actually VERY HQ but all the lighting messed with it ...

    and isn't the purpose of recreating and re-doing something to make it better?

    i'll brb imma fix and repost my results as 3 v3 for you :P
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    i'll take it that you love it?
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    i have no idea what u did to it, but the quality is shit


    Shifty sexy shit


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