Still in the works just looking for TIPS not OPINIONS on what i can / should do with the text / to help addon to it its obv black and white i personally like it but i know it needs more / edited text and yes my name is Brad irl.
Idk what you could really do with this since it's so messy but
-Lose the bevel
-add more contrast to the clipping mask of the text
-use a clean font not a grungy one like helvetica or something
-move it down a little
-it seems the text won't be visible without the bevel so add a barely visible stroke like a 1 px stroke and lower opacity