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    Talking My Gfx design v2

    Okay i admit that my first design was not good but that's not important as long as i am learning..

    Here is my second one:





    IF you have any suggestion post it, but if you don't like it then fuck off and don't waste any of your damn time

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    Not bad, but I'd change the background to something more unique. The whole forest theme is kinda generic.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MinivanManBACKUP View Post
    Not bad, but I'd change the background to something more unique. The whole forest theme is kinda generic.
    Thanks for the advice

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    tbh this is actually worse that the first
    the render is placed terribadly with dodgy outer glow
    the text doesnt fit at all
    to sum it up, it's not aesthetically pleasing


    Shifty sexy shit


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    It's horrible.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Parade View Post
    It's horrible.
    Shut up. CS bitch.

    and no problem.

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    Don't put layer effects on your render. Use solid fonts, not grunge fonts. I would advise not using text only because if not done correctly it can actually make the piece look worse. In most cases I would definitely not make the text quite as big as you did here. I would try and add a few more effects in there and try and focus more on an atmosphere of elements rather than a background and a render. Looking up some tutorials in the tutorials section or on google would help for sure.

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    dude,
    no depth,
    never outline a main render unles it is for effect (when you are very skilled)
    no blending
    text is too "Out There"
    no flow
    i give it a 0.05/10
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