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    I'm seeing Stars.



    Looks a bit empty on the left. Suggestions please
    I see what you did there.

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    a nice render would do
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    I think that little aqua brush on the right is kind of awkward
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    Quote Originally Posted by ᴡɪᴢ ᴋʜᴀʟɪғᴀ View Post
    I think that little aqua brush on the right is kind of awkward
    air brushing
    I see what you did there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Kurlzz View Post


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    Text would go perfectly on the left.

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    Put the text "Pretend to see"
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    Not having a random black spot would be nice also it looks intentional
    Borders also dont work

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    Signatures like this need a smaller canvas to work with. Theres to much empty space on the left which ruins it, and if you put text on the left it will just bring the attention away from the focal...

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    Quote Originally Posted by katylovez View Post
    Put the text "Pretend to see"
    a bit too long? /


    Quote Originally Posted by fecher View Post
    Signatures like this need a smaller canvas to work with. Theres to much empty space on the left which ruins it, and if you put text on the left it will just bring the attention away from the focal...

    Quote Originally Posted by Keroaplt View Post
    Not having a random black spot would be nice also it looks intentional
    Borders also dont work
    Thanks, I'll get to it
    I see what you did there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Kurlzz View Post
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    a bit too long? /
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    I would've added and spread more space/star stocks on that empty place, lower the fill and opacity and set it to overlay, that way you can get a bit of flow into that space and it wouldn't looked to drenched out. Also that open space would be perfect for text, maybe something transparent, bold, and good looking. The black border on the bottom and top is unneeded, without it it becomes better looking.
    I love the "glow" beside his right shoulder on the signature, but maybe just lower it down slightly.
    Overall IMO getting rid of the border, lowering the lighting beside his shoulder, adding more space/star stocks to that empty space - setting it to overlay - lowering fill and opacity, and adding text would make it look nice.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Hero View Post
    I would've added and spread more space/star stocks on that empty place, lower the fill and opacity and set it to overlay, that way you can get a bit of flow into that space and it wouldn't looked to drenched out. Also that open space would be perfect for text, maybe something transparent, bold, and good looking. The black border on the bottom and top is unneeded, without it it becomes better looking.
    I love the "glow" beside his right shoulder on the signature, but maybe just lower it down slightly.
    Overall IMO getting rid of the border, lowering the lighting beside his shoulder, adding more space/star stocks to that empty space - setting it to overlay - lowering fill and opacity, and adding text would make it look nice.
    i see thanks

    i don't really get under which circumstances where you'd use a border and when not to
    I see what you did there.

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    10/10 Very good work!

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