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    WIP - Lightning



    What font would look nice here?

    Any comments, suggestions and critique?

    EDIT: According to the critique I've received so far,



    Again, what font should be used here, if at all?
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    Looks like the pliers are the main focus of this... don't think it should be though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KABLE View Post
    Looks like the pliers are the main focus of this... don't think it should be though.
    I didn't catch that, the lighting is messed up!

    Thanks!

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    i like how to sword/ or w/e is the focus but you should brighten up the chick as well to add a layer of lighting to it, (the sword, then the chick holding the sword, then the background.)= what is seen.

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    Right side is way to empty bro,
    blending needs work, put some affects in there, move the focal over to the right a little and just blend it in, and i think this would look nice


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    Right side is way to empty bro,
    blending needs work, put some affects in there, move the focal over to the right a little and just blend it in, and i think this would look nice


    It's still a WIP, but thanks for the critique.

    EDIT: does anyone have a suggested font?

    o:
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    I don't feel the flow, its good for a first though

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    Quote Originally Posted by OxygenLite View Post


    It's still a WIP, but thanks for the critique.

    EDIT: does anyone have a suggested font?

    o:
    Impact with Clippy mask, always works maybe with a shadow and some strokes on it also, just play around with it.


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    Thanks for all the comments and feedback, guys.

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