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    2nd Photoshop Try

    which one is best?


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    The first 1, the second ones text doesn't really fit with the focal point and the background. Also, If you make the text greyish it would look better, get a soft brush about 10-15% and zoom in to about 500% and move to brush along the sides it would blend in better with the focal and background. also the white brush u used around the text looks retarded, but that is my opinion. On the left side upper and lower part of the render i see there is a low opacity thing erase that if you can, unless it is apart of the background you chose

    And on the left side of the render is looks like there was a hard small brush used around it. Remove with a low opacity eraser
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    The only difference i can see is the text.
    Personally I like the 2nd one better but...
    The 2 sigs I made... people say have bad text so... XD

    How does the color of the text not fit with the focal point? o-o
    With the background tho... :/
    I guess it comes down to personal point of view.
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    will try to improve
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    Quote Originally Posted by SKIENT View Post
    will try to improve
    dman_124@Yahoo.com send me the .psd and ill send u my results back so u can check out the shit i did to blend the text in
    I may still be a begenner but i love text

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