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    Gift For Keroaplt


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    Dunno why, but the render just doesn't look right because of the red shoulders, but everything I tried jsut fucked it up even more.

    CnC
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    good job dude

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    soft round brush color'd with black should help u blend it in more

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    Anyone else?
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    Lighting looks fake and forced.


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    Light source is too weak and artificial looking.

    C4d's are too bulky not really placed that well from a creative standpoint.
    Lacks depth and blending, Text placement is no bueno makes it a primary focal point.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chuck View Post
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    send me the PSD. i will show u Dman_124@yahoo

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post
    Light source is too weak and artificial looking.

    C4d's are too bulky not really placed that well from a creative standpoint.
    Lacks depth and blending, Text placement is no bueno makes it a primary focal point.
    I just added a soft brush above the canvas and then used Render>Lightning Effects and put the lightning what else can I do
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    Use your burn and dodge tool


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    Actually now that I look at it it's not as great as I thought...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chuck View Post


    I just added a soft brush above the canvas and then used Render>Lightning Effects and put the lightning what else can I do
    Use a light stock, motion blur it the fuck out, then put layer on screen or linear dodge.

    Instant sex light source. Just make sure you mess with the angles so it's relevant to your focal.

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    I think a better lookn focal that goes with the background
    would look better.


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    I'm not touching this shit anymore it looks bad anyways. I'll catch onto anotherone and see what comes up
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post


    Use a light stock, motion blur it the fuck out, then put layer on screen or linear dodge.

    Instant sex light source. Just make sure you mess with the angles so it's relevant to your focal.
    Thanks for the tip, imma try this on my text tag.


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