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    Something's wrong with this one


    I see what you did there.

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    Yeah, the render is over sharpened. The yellow shit on the bottom right should pop out more.



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    Quote Originally Posted by slag84311 View Post
    Yeah, the render is over sharpened. The yellow shit on the bottom right should pop out more.
    Thanks, will fix
    I see what you did there.

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    You should do something about the big dick/pole next to his head.

    The bottom effects should pop out more but i think that will ruin the light source at the top. And fuck up the focal.

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    too contrasted in the render
    you only want it to be just hitting white and just hitting black


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Make it smaller and do more, like create more of a mental picture.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Paradox View Post
    You should do something about the big dick/pole next to his head.

    The bottom effects should pop out more but i think that will ruin the light source at the top. And fuck up the focal.
    will try to mess around with the lighting, thanks.


    Quote Originally Posted by Scrcrw View Post
    too contrasted in the render
    you only want it to be just hitting white and just hitting black
    just hitting white and just hitting black?

    Quote Originally Posted by Hyak View Post
    Make it smaller and do more, like create more of a mental picture.
    smaller, mental picture? more effects and smaller?
    I see what you did there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Kurlzz View Post


    just hitting white and just hitting black?

    i'm talking about levels


    Shifty sexy shit


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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Kurlzz View Post





    smaller, mental picture? more effects and smaller?
    Smaller in dimension is just what I prefer unless you actually use the space, you used the space obviously there's something there but its just so boring, make it interesting

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scrcrw View Post
    i'm talking about levels
    ahh, I got it. thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by Hyak View Post

    Smaller in dimension is just what I prefer unless you actually use the space, you used the space obviously there's something there but its just so boring, make it interesting
    I understand much better now, thanks. seems to me i need to look at PSD's.
    I see what you did there.

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