Title removed. Pornographic url. Will result in a ban in the future.
First off, the brush spam behind. Dont do that. The effects are poor. The lighting however is odd. It needs to go like this.
His right boobie needs burn, and so does his right leg. Under the arms need burning. And rest need to have nice and balanced light.
The effects are poor. Try finding a tut with an effect you like. And use it for LYF jkz dont. But when you read tuts. What most people do is take their idea and change into their own, somehow trying to make it look better by thmselmes and sometimes they succeed. like what i did with kero's tuts
Lighting can be made with layer adjustments layers such as brightness/contrast adjustment or just doing it the more effecient way but harder with the burn/dodge tool.
The text.. NEVER try and achieve text like that. If you are going to place text try and use the rule of thirds (google it) to help you with that.
I agree that its monotone, its like its gradienting from a burned orange to a bright washed out yellow.
If you want good tuts pm me please if you are really dedicated and looking to improve you work