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    For SOTW Contest



    I kinda like it, but what do I know about Graphic Design.. critique please? =D
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    Crappy effects that have nothing to do with each other, no lighting, can't read text for shits, colors don't work at all together.
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    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    hmm im not a sig maker or dont get involved with anything to do with sigs but it seems as if the background doesnt go at all with the cut or whatever the name is O.O

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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt View Post
    Crappy effects that have nothing to do with each other, no lighting, can't read text for shits, colors don't work at all together.
    I made the text so you couldn't read it, and I'm fairly sure black and red go w/ each other.

    Thanks for your comment though, I made it just for fun, so I was kind of expecting comments like this.
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    lack of blending and background and focal just dont go to together :/
    and text is very hard to read, and it makes a distraction


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    Quote Originally Posted by Embrehh View Post


    I made the text so you couldn't read it, and I'm fairly sure black and red go w/ each other.

    Thanks for your comment though, I made it just for fun, so I was kind of expecting comments like this.
    That means it's useless text. Next, what's with that yellowish-orange designs in the back? More crap. Also, black and red? Fine. There's no lighting WHATSOEVER at all though, so it turns bad.
    Quote Originally Posted by ViciousArt
    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt View Post
    That means it's useless text. Next, what's with that yellowish-orange designs in the back? More crap. Also, black and red? Fine. There's no lighting WHATSOEVER at all though, so it turns bad.
    Trust me, if I added lighting effects, it would look even crappier. But thanks for the comments <3

    And the text was there, just for me, because I find it inspirational :3
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    Nice Job!!!


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    If this is your first its ok.

    But if u r "experienced" than its terrible.

    No lighting, text is shit, shitty text placement.

    The background is like Chinese, and the chick is like white and a slut. Thats just the gist of it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SouLess View Post
    If this is your first its ok.

    But if u r "experienced" than its terrible.

    No lighting, text is shit, shitty text placement.

    The background is like Chinese, and the chick is like white and a slut. Thats just the gist of it.
    Yeah it was my first

    Thanks though
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    The black on your render isn't exactly black. I bet if you increased the contrast on the render or just brought up the levels of the black it would look better. The blood red is just kind of disturbing. B+R do go together but just don't work in this sig.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ClanTag View Post
    The black on your render isn't exactly black. I bet if you increased the contrast on the render or just brought up the levels of the black it would look better. The blood red is just kind of disturbing. B+R do go together but just don't work in this sig.
    I see. Thanks for your comments, I really do appreciate it :]
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    this is why this section now depresses me.



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