Stop flaming him and give some good critism.. If your so experienceed
All your doing is telling him what's bad about it. Maybe try an telling him how to improve it.
i agree the render is horid.. and in all honesty. Don't use text ahaha make tags instead(no text) and it looks like a Color balance layer, Try gradient maps.. even ones that look bad initially set them to hardlight.. EXPERIMENT!! or else you'll find yourself stuck at the same level.