The text could use more work. You really have potential and skills, but what you mostly do misses a few elements, such as this one which misses depth and flow.
And it wouldn't hurt if you made some figural work, not only abstract.
ok now you are making random ass shit and calling it abstract T_T
Looks like it was done in 15 minutes : (
Come on bro
Make something like this time yourself and see if you get anything done in 15 minutes
I mostly do abstract because i can't do real stuff like people and stuff also it's easier to do random ass shit but not just any random ass shit because it still has to maintain some composition which is what i tried to do in the original drawing I did that this was based off from I know it's squiggly and shit though
I will try to work on maintaining composition and flow with the next piece I do i'm not gonna stop doing abstract stuff though but i will try to get some sort of real life element or structured thing
As much as I enjoy this coloring style, (it reminds me of those grungy doodle vectors)
This really does lack in the most important areas imo.
Rather than just drawing these shapes on an empty canvas and leaving it like that,
I would have liked to see them become part of something bigger.
As is, it just kind of leaves people with the "What the fuck is that thing?" impression,
whereas, if you developed something else in the bg,whether it be relevant to real life or more abstract shapes,
Your creation wouldn't seem so isolated and weird to look at.
If I were in your shoes this would probably be more of a week long project.
Doing stuff like this takes a lot more time then throwing a tag together,
that's whats great about being able to save .psd's and .eps files.
Like Chuck said, and I already know, you have potential mix that with patience and you have win.