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    1st Tag in Fucking Forever




















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    Do not want. Half of the canvas is empty. Looks like you haven't put any effort into it.
    The smudging is boring and weird, although the colours somehow do match.
    And as I said on Dylan's thread, B&W doesn't go with smudging.
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    What is with all that darkness

    I'm not sure ATM but it looks like you only placed a render on a black background and smudged the render.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post
    Do not want. Half of the canvas is empty. Looks like you haven't put any effort into it.
    The smudging is boring and weird, although the colours somehow do match.
    And as I said on Dylan's thread, B&W doesn't go with smudging.
    IDK where to go from here.. :P It's basically a WIP. Just asked dylan if he'd like to collab and finish it.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Cynic View Post

    IDK where to go from here.. :P It's basically a WIP. Just asked dylan if he'd like to collab and finish it.
    Well a collab's not gonna bring you anywhere if you want to evolve this style further.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post


    Well a collab's not gonna bring you anywhere if you want to evolve this style further.
    Nor is trying to come up with a way to take it further and then irreversibly ruining it.

    Any ideas?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post


    Well a collab's not gonna bring you anywhere if you want to evolve this style further.
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    Reversed Flow

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cynic View Post




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    Reversed Flow

    I don't know what to say, really.
    Too blurry (even for a smudge).
    You should duplicate the smudge layers and put them on Screen mode to add more vibrance.
    There's absolutely no flow in this tag even though there's a slightly noticeable direction in which the smudging is going.
    This piece also lacks in depth.
    Add more effects, like space stocks or something.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post


    I don't know what to say, really.
    Too blurry (even for a smudge).
    You should duplicate the smudge layers and put them on Screen mode to add more vibrance.
    There's absolutely no flow in this tag even though there's a slightly noticeable direction in which the smudging is going.
    This piece also lacks in depth.
    Add more effects, like space stocks or something.


    Increased the vibrance.
    I think I'm just gonna give up on this tag now.


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    worked on depth/blurriness (I think)







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    space stocked



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    My advice is stick to sharp line smudging opposed to spread smudging.
    It just always looks better. You want the strength to be on 80 or above,
    and you also want to be real careful with mouse control when you do it,
    slow deliberate drags across the canvas. Otherwise if you snap the mouse to quick you lose integrity in the sharpness,
    just ends up all smooth looking and shit.
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    My setting are on 90 percent strength/hardness.
    Do not overlap repeating streaks of smudges like that. You want the flow towards the render.
    Too bright in some places and the render doesn't really seem a part of it. And the colors are really bad, like really bad.
    You should be doing better with a tablet : )

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