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    Remove the "Collab" text. Oversharpened in places.
    The head of the render sticks out too much and it's not blended enough with the background.
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    Not bad fellers.

    White text needs to go.
    Blur on the right is too much.
    Sharpen transition could have been executed much better.
    Composition isn't bad at all, but there are parts where it seems sloppy.
    As far as lighting goes everybody seems to have their own preferences on what they like here,
    I personally prefer spotlighting because it's much more interesting opposed to normal global,
    technically speaking , nothing is off other than it being a bit over exposed.
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    I changed alot in this signature, im sorry Cynic, but i just didn't like the way you positioned the focal

    also the head is suppose to stick out chuck because its suppose to look as if its coming out at you, also that dam iris blur is addictive
    also the spots that look over sharpened are actually spots i left from the displacement tool

    was a fun collab, i enjoyed it, should do it again sometime


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    I changed alot in this signature, im sorry Cynic, but i just didn't like the way you positioned the focal

    also the head is suppose to stick out chuck because its suppose to look as if its coming out at you, also that dam iris blur is addictive
    also the spots that look over sharpened are actually spots i left from the displacement tool

    was a fun collab, i enjoyed it, should do it again sometime
    Our collab turned out much better IMO.
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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    I changed alot in this signature, im sorry Cynic, but i just didn't like the way you positioned the focal

    also the head is suppose to stick out chuck because its suppose to look as if its coming out at you, also that dam iris blur is addictive
    also the spots that look over sharpened are actually spots i left from the displacement tool

    was a fun collab, i enjoyed it, should do it again sometime
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    Our collab turned out much better IMO.
    We should do a triple collab



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    Quote Originally Posted by Cynic View Post


    We should do a triple collab
    Yeah, Dylan starts, you finish, I watch.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post


    Yeah, Dylan starts, you finish, I watch.
    You start (best imagination/compo), I middle, dylan finishes

    I just skipped my postban.

    Thank god that's legal now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cynic View Post


    You start (best imagination/compo), I middle, dylan finishes

    I just skipped my postban.

    Thank god that's legal now.
    Brb reporting. Someone should edit it, and add a tincy blur layer just to see how much better it looks when you don't oversharpen things

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    I think it needs some lighting
    and the bottom left is blurred too much

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    To much blurring in my opinion
    White collab text should be removed, but I like how you spelled your names
    I like how you used the c4d
    A lot of darkness in some areas, which I am not a fan of, you could of at least doubled the c4d layer and put it at the top and blur it out like you did the rest, it might actually look better

    It an a improvement from the last tag you did uth this render
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    well done mang well done

    Take out that white text, and work on getting a more defined lighting source.
    I can see you were going for the gloom kinda look, but even then there has to be light coming from somewhere.
    Bottom left's blurring is distractive and unbalanced when compared to the right side.

    I personally would have loved it if there was a bit more yellow put into the effects itself to blend with the render.

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    Eeek.. where to begin..
    remove all the text. Its horrible.
    The blur is throwing it off. Blur is for photography. (not saying that you cant use it for graphic design... although I've never seen it used in appealing way.
    Colors are boring. the teal looks way to washed out.
    Your focal is dead center.. if your not counting the text as a focal.
    And its over-sharpened in alot of places. Layer>New Layer>apply image>Filter>sharpen>sharpen edges set layer to 40ish % opacity...thats all you really need.
    I would personally scrap don't like it at all.
    It just has a really begginer feel to it >.<
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