A bit cluttered and the sizes of each render is off, I mean the guy is 4 tiems larger than the warthog. Looks sorta like yu sut added all tehse pics together and added your name to it. 4/10 for the effort
kinda? its quite, try blending some of the other spartans and a color overlay on them so that its easier on the eyes. sides that nice, o and txt could use some improvement. but dont ask me how im not a pro at txt, the only advice i can give you is keep it simple odnt go for sweeeet looking txt. most of the time clean, crisp txt is the best.