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    Business Card Design - Front and Back

    I was bored and I said imma do a business card design, simple one.
    What do you think?
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    The text is choppy.
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    Don't listen to chuck.. he gives horrible feedback.. and just spams useless crap..

    I like the design you made for the card, but the text could be worked on. make it more snazzy and not so boring. maybe a bolder font..
    also save as .PNG, will make it better quality


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    Don't listen to chuck.. he gives horrible feedback.. and just spams useless crap..

    I like the design you made for the card, but the text could be worked on. make it more snazzy and not so boring. maybe a bolder font..
    also save as .PNG, will make it better quality
    Text actually is really choppy where the name is..
    which makes no sense to me..
    Why is the text smooth on everything but the name..seems a bit suspect.
    Also, if you don't like someones cnc too bad.
    This isn't the "Dylan's opinion" section. Everyone can offer their critique, despite whether you like it or not.
    I'd also like to add that I would take Chuck's critique over yours any day of the week without even thinking twice.

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    Its just chucks feedback pisses me off sometimes.. he says whats wrong with it but he doesn't give the "how to fix it" which isn't CnC in my book.. he always states whats bad but he never gives positive feedback..
    so therefore his CNC is trash to me.. until he learns how to give proper CnC..

    atleast when i give CNC i give reason behind it and tell the people how they can fix it maybe.
    could careless if you don't like me or take my "CnC" over his anyday without thinking twice..
    Like you said everyone is entitled to there opinion i gave mine.. so you're say everyone can give there opinion but me?
    hmmm
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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    Its just chucks feedback pisses me off sometimes.. he says whats wrong with it but he doesn't give the "how to fix it" which isn't CnC in my book.. he always states whats bad but he never gives positive feedback..
    so therefore his CNC is trash to me.. until he learns how to give proper CnC..

    atleast when i give CNC i give reason behind it and tell the people how they can fix it maybe.
    could careless if you don't like me or take my "CnC" over his anyday without thinking twice..
    Like you said everyone is entitled to there opinion i gave mine.. so you're say everyone can give there opinion but me?
    hmmm
    No need to take shit out of context.
    The show offs section is to critique peoples work.
    Not to critique someones critique.
    Doing stuff like that only stirs up shit,which is pretty counter productive and tends to derail threads.

    Now on topic:

    The design looks like something from the 70's.
    Name text is too choppy.
    I normally like business cards to be simple. Elegant and well composed text works just fine. Nothing flashy.
    Though if I were handing out business cards for graphics design, I would want to show case a small preview of my skill,
    most likely in the form of a completely boss logo. That is where this card lacks in my honest opinion.

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    It's weird how you have the logo in the side yet the text is like way the the right the text as was mentioned looks choppy but only on the name some color changes and repositioning of the components would do it good

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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    Don't listen to chuck.. he gives horrible feedback.. and just spams useless crap..

    I like the design you made for the card, but the text could be worked on. make it more snazzy and not so boring. maybe a bolder font..
    also save as .PNG, will make it better quality
    Thanks for the feedback =) ill change the text

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    i do like the colors, but they seem waay too bright for a business card in my opinion. it looks very professional though
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    Herp derp, basically what everyone else said too. The card seem boring and noobish. It doesn't leave a good impression and all the flaws that could have easily been avoided only confirm that you weren't quite sure of what you were doing.

    Look up some tutorials and practice.

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