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    Corona Advertisement

    So, about a month or two ago I thought of starting a personal project that I wanted to finish in a year or so but I hadn't had the time to start until now .
    Basically this consists of making something for every category on Behance and this is basically impossible cause of stuff like Art direction, crafts, industrial design, and so many others. Even though I'm still gonna try and do as many as I can just to try new things.
    What do you think about this first piece? I think the mainly blending needs more work.
    CNC please



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    What do all the shadows lean towards the center? Shouldn't they all be heading into the same direction (left or right)?
    It has the feel/aesthetics of a real liquor advertisement (sexy female, beautiful landscape) but also, another thing I can't let slide.. why is there a tree stump on the beach?

    I like it, and it's good, but it has more potential.

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    Too much focus on the model, but I guess that's just how every commercial works these days...
    It looks kinda lq to be honest, the bottle is blurry and the outlines of it are choppy in places.
    Maybe you should try blending the model better and adding some contrast?
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    Thanks guys, yeah the quality is somewhat poor especially on the stump. I guess it could be a palm tree stump that's why it's on the beach.

    just thought i'd post the pictures i used







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    Those little white outlines around the model bother me



    And the bottle looks a little flat to me. Work on the blending some more
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    Quote Originally Posted by Katy View Post
    Those little white outlines around the model bother me



    And the bottle looks a little flat to me. Work on the blending some more
    That's just light. I think o.0

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    Look closely at the beer bottle. Looks kind of awkward.

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    The only CnC I have at the moment would be regarding the quality around the tree stump and Corona bottle. However, it's just the render like you stated, understandable.

    The chick is bangin' hot.

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