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    Looking for feedback on this Image

    So last night I get pretty bored and made this U.S. Air Force logo/badge thingy in Adobe Illustrator. I normally use Photoshop CS6 but we started using Adobe illustrator in my College Illustration class so i'm trying to learn the program. It took me about 2 hours, getting all the colors right on the jets sucked. Just looking for some feedback so i can improve upon, since of course this was only my 2nd time using Adobe illustrator.

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    I really like it except for the fact that the jets overlap. I think it would look a lot better if they didn't and maybe even better if they were flying slightly more straight rather than diagonally down.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryguy View Post
    I really like it except for the fact that the jets overlap. I think it would look a lot better if they didn't and maybe even better if they were flying slightly more straight rather than diagonally down.
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    Really like that emblem, but the jets came out very nice also. Good job.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr Allen View Post
    Really like that emblem, but the jets came out very nice also. Good job.
    Thank you

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    Really well put together and nice colors but the jets have something going on like the position is a little wrong

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    I would rather have a more grungy colour variation... these colours fit really well and overall looks great

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    Quote Originally Posted by Get_Headshotted View Post
    Like this?

    I meant like more "at you" but this isnt bad. I would maybe overlap the jets over the ribbon, just the red part though. Keep the blue part on top of the jets.

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    Nice job, I just don't like the font you used, make it more solid.
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