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    I just tried something. (It looks horrible tho)



    It's much bigger but...
    It's to ugly to make any bigger for you guys to see



    Any tips or so on what I should learn / or things I could try to do?

     
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    Pretty cool random art i wouldve put a a different color then yellow in it though you know someing to go with the flow like some aqua blue or dried blood kind of red but the purple and blue look neat
    Last edited by Cross-fire; 12-23-2012 at 12:48 PM.

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    Dude, the best advice i've ever gotten from graffiti, is if you know its not good... don't post it. Some people disagree, but when it boils down to it do you want the doodle you did during class critiqued? Or do you want the masterpiece that you tried your hardest to perfect, it might hurt more to get the second one critiqued, but you'll get more helpful tips because they'll really point out your weak spots.

    I'm not gonna lie, artistically, its kinda bland and not to creative... Kinda reminds me of one of those things you try and see the hidden image. I haven't seen your other work, because I haven't been here in years, but my advice would be to try start simpler, follow some tuts, and when you get those under total control try branching off and finding your own niche. It might be different for GFX, I'm just saying what is said commonly in the graffiti world.

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    Post the whole thing.

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    Is this just smudge?
    Just wonderin'.

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    I mean if its a work of art, there are "guidelines" and rules, but to be honest, as long as you like it, that's all that is important. People might hate it, but art is self expression.

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    Maybe I should try to make something else

     
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    Put some brighter colors?

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    Wdf is this?

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    brighter colors then in would look alright

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