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    Shitload during downtime.

    CnC >.<
    Tell me what you think:


    ^I MADE THAT RENDER BY MYSELF


    I spent the majority of the rest of the time rendering ^^
    Im getting good
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    lol wtf is scope?
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    your biggest problem man, theres no clear focal on any, you've just tried to blend everything, just add some lighting effects and maybe use slightly larger renders to bring out the focal a bit, but just brushing over them there are no real focal points. I can't really point out your text because im awful at text, and it's one of the hardest things to get right, but you need to choose and download some better font's and make the text stick out, the text makes/breaks a sig and takes a lot of work on to get right.

    Good luck with your next ones mate, should be good.

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    Focal point and text are two big issues

    theres still a lot you could work on

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    Well I would be better at text if my GAYASS FUCKING COMPUTER WOULD LET ME DOWNLOAD SOME
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    Stop re-sizing render to show the WHOLE render. Just do a piece of it and work with that, instead of leaving tons of space to make it more hard work.

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    So you want me to make it so there isnt a lot of space to work with? Or make the render small?
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    ROFLMAO!!!!!

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    Omg. Fail.
    Make the renders BIGGER.
    Don't make them show ALL of it.
    IDK why im talking like snil.
    O WELL!

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    Lol, anyway, thanks .
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    Quote Originally Posted by chiknwang View Post
    lol wtf is scope?
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    how do i use numpad ??
    ROFLMAO!!!!!

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    I think...blurry and probably too much shit on them

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