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    Lightbulb spiderman










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    I like it!

    Wanna make me another sig?
    You got skills.

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    can it be a hot anime chick instead of a real chick??









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    Hmm, the flow of the sig going a different way to what the focal point is.. It doesn't look right because of that. Plus looks like you've only added a stock as the background, then duplicated the spiderman and motion blurred it a few time, changed the layer style a few times, then smudged another duplicated layer of spiderman. Also looks like you've added some clipping masks, or some C4D's set to overlay, which totally need removing. If you could get the flow of the sig to match the focal points, then it would be good. Until then it looks a mess.

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    i think i get what ur saying if it all went to the right?









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    Hes saying theres too much stuff on it, and make the render stand out more

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    like that?









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    It looks better, but still the focal point goes a little-bit to the text

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    yeah i no i no i cant put ur eyes to render its hard i might aswell put no words :s









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    Dont leave a bunch of space on the left

    even the two spaces out, move the render to the left, create clipping masks on the text(as long as its readable) to blend it, put the light on the opposite side, brighten the render, use the burn tool on the bg(low opacity), and kinda blur it about 1px



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    Quote Originally Posted by Dorado View Post
    Dont leave a bunch of space on the left

    even the two spaces out, move the render to the left, create clipping masks on the text(as long as its readable) to blend it, put the light on the opposite side, brighten the render, use the burn tool on the bg(low opacity), and kinda blur it about 1px
    I agree with him ^^

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    I agree with him ^^



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    i tryed to clip text and u couldnt see it so oh well!!

    there is shadow on right so im not gonna put light over there -.-
    Last edited by lostcausejr; 06-03-2009 at 02:02 PM.









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    Terrible signature.

    Why is the city render at night but you have a sun?
    And what the hell is coming off of his fingers?
    And last, text is too simple.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kirapwns View Post
    Terrible signature.

    Why is the city render at night but you have a sun?
    And what the hell is coming off of his fingers?
    And last, text is too simple.
    what city render i nvr use 1?









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