The Way You Placed The Lighting Would Suggest That The Focal Point Was In The Center When You Really Want People Focasing On A Good Looking Piece Around The Render.
And On The Second Sig,
The Focal Point Was Around The Text,
That Was A Fatal Mistake,
So Was Not Keeping Your Sig At A High Opacity.
ya sure, cuz there's still a few things I can't figure how teh fuck to do >.> also, the random lines in sig 1 was from the " movie lens flare " ...was just messin around with it, kept cuz it looks like lazorz...I think my third one is good, but shouln't have blurred so frickin much in the middle -.-...