well... seems you used the topaz the right way
btw i don't see any good focal (since the eyes are still being captured from the high quality gears)...
in some points the signature looks a bit flat (like on the right)
I completely quote taken4time about the flow... try to improve it a bit
btw it still really eye catching... and i kinda like it
Oh, I get it know, lol.
Well, great work, simple but awesome, kind of smart to combine that BG with that render. Keep it up.
And BTW, where is that render from? Is it from a game or TV Show or something? I kinda like it.