1st thing, the text is much nicer on this one and isn't a distraction. I likes the deers, good use of pen tool, if thats what you used. Not as good as the other one in my opinion, no real depth in it, but it's still got a nice look.
(Sorry, wasn't there when you were talking to me on msn :/)
He Who Dares Wins And i'll die to win, cause i'm born to lose Fucking Civilian