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    Fusion Betrayal Collab



    Fusion Betrayal Collab piece.

    This was for a challenge against D.I.K

    Made by me and Lostcausejr

    Comment and Criticism appreciated.

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    Okay, the other faded snake in back is sorta annyoing.

    Text fits in color/blending. The font could be slightly tweaked, and the lower text like motion blur (Like Fusion --BLUR HERE--
    --Betrayal--)

    Nothing else i can think of. 8.7/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by PhotoNoobster View Post
    Okay, the other faded snake in back is sorta annyoing.

    Text fits in color/blending. The font could be slightly tweaked, and the lower text like motion blur (Like Fusion --BLUR HERE--
    --Betrayal--)

    Nothing else i can think of. 8.7/10
    Ok thanks for the CnC
    The 'other' Faded snake?

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    Maybe it's my imagination but there seems to be another snake mouth left-diagonal from his head

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    Quote Originally Posted by PhotoNoobster View Post
    Maybe it's my imagination but there seems to be another snake mouth left-diagonal from his head
    Yeah i just noticed that, and nah its just the way it's turned out.

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    oh and 1 more thing u have this outward flow, which is nice IMO, but then on the left u have this inward darkness, it takes away from flow

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    Quote Originally Posted by PhotoNoobster View Post
    oh and 1 more thing u have this outward flow, which is nice IMO, but then on the left u have this inward darkness, it takes away from flow
    Yeah, true. It was meant to be like that on the left, comming outwards, but then at the same time the general flow was meant to be the way the snakes body was going, so had to mix and match. Didn't generally work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by moosicgawd View Post
    Pretty busy.
    not too bad though.
    Im kinda busy so i dont have to give a good crit
    8/10
    Ahh fair enough, cheers for the high rate though mate.

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