oh and 1 more thing u have this outward flow, which is nice IMO, but then on the left u have this inward darkness, it takes away from flow
Yeah, true. It was meant to be like that on the left, comming outwards, but then at the same time the general flow was meant to be the way the snakes body was going, so had to mix and match. Didn't generally work.
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