Looks pretty good to me Doc. I like those glowing splatters, nice effect on those and the twirl filter was utilized nicely imo.
I'm not a huge fan of this render though. I mean it's cut perfectly, and the quality is excellent.
But that fucking weapon is huge. It takes up a lot of canvas, and though it is a pretty cool focal point,
I feel like it's soaking up way too much attention, which in a way takes away a lot from your own work.
That being said though, I personally would have struggled with this render I think, so the fact you made it work is pretty impressive.