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    Third Tag

    This is my third tag, I did it free style no tut trying to improve on my current tag. I used a stock this time and It feels kinda empty to me. I didn't add the repeat line thing even though each of those areas feel empty. I dont have a lot of techniques yet so this was mostly gradient maps, c4ds a bit of brushing so I kind of ran out of things to add and I think my tags kinda empty. Rate/Hate. Please tell me where I can improve on.


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    Like i already said, your signs look kinda poul, you need to make focus on the Render, this background is eating my eyes and i don't got eyes to the principal (render).

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    Well It was a stock so I wasn't sure If Cropping out the render would work out. I'm not sure what poul means but to focus more on the renders I added a glow from brushing and some c4ds to distract from the background. Can you elaborate more on the "eyes to the principal" idea. I'm kinda new to that. Thanks for the feedback though =)

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    hm really nothing u can do when u have buildings as the background except put some color and desings in them
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    So building stocks suck, as does this tag. =( Yeah, I just need some more techniques, I read up on a few tuts but none of them can really be used in this tag.

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    Pretty empty..
    I don't like the BG stock or the size of the render..
    The work you did isn't too bad..
    Its just bland Lol..
    Keep up the good work ^-^

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    Yeah thats what I was worried about. I couldnt really add anything to spice it up. Anyhow, Thanks for the input. =)

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