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    Spidey Tag

    After looking at tuts from Baka, (you can look him up on youtube if you're wanting to get into GFX.) I made this in about 30 minutes.



    Please critique and comment.

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    1ST THING FIRST.

    TEXT: I KNOW ITS HARD.
    It's in probably the worst position possible and the worst style of text, try and make the text a bit smaller and maybe ina different position, a position where it doesn't seem far away from the focal yet not too close.

    Render: I think you've blurred the render too much because it honestly looks like low quality to me. I see you did try and create depth but it hasn't worked out very well. Also the render isn't well blended in to the background, try a bit of smudging with the render and try to make it one with the background.

    Background: Simple but not too bad. It needs more VARIETY. Try use some c4d's and not just the basic smudging or distortion.

    One last thing, LIGHTING.

    The lighting IMHO is not how it should be, it disturbs me too much and there's too much lighting. Maybe another place or lower the opacity of the lighting.

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    Re did it, and tried to fix everything you said @Demonz.

    Hope you like.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snuggles <3 View Post


    Re did it, and tried to fix everything you said @Demonz.

    Hope you like.
    Still looks the same, the text is still not as it should be, the font is wrong, wrong colour. Render still looks low quality and the blurring of the render is STILL overdone.

    Also try and add some borders.

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    I have to disagree with @Demonz

    its actually pretty good, Got some nice flow going on, Light seems a bit over powering but no biggy
    text is okay, but i wouldn't worry about text right now. Nice colors, i think you could blend spidey in just a bit

    overall a decent tag.


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko™ View Post
    I have to disagree with @Demonz

    its actually pretty good, Got some nice flow going on, Light seems a bit over powering but no biggy
    text is okay, but i wouldn't worry about text right now. Nice colors, i think you could blend spidey in just a bit

    overall a decent tag.

    So you're saying that render doesn't look blurred or LQ?

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    I had to blur it to some extent, because imo the original image was very sharp, and pixelated.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Snuggles <3 View Post
    I had to blur it to some extent, because imo the original image was very sharp, and pixelated.

    Never blur a whole focal like that. The original render looks a hell of a lot better than what you did to it.
    Just sayin.

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    I don't recommend using global lighting.

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    nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    you should improve on quality and light source.

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    Sharpen the render, and shade your sig ACCORDING to the light source and where it's positioned. Lack of depth destroys the signature, aswell as the ordinary background.

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