The render is kind of warped man. You should take your time doing these. It look's like it was just thrown together. Try using brushes and filters. Take a look around this section there is pleany of materal at your desposal.
yeah dude dont hurry take ur time lol i jsut took 1 hr making my hitman sign... i psted it right now go check it out... so back to this post... umm the text has nothing to do with the background u have to make the text flow into its surrounding u want the public to see the image not the text... move it around a bit ,etc