Too much twixtor or whatever you used, too many artifacts, too much CC, ugly effect on the top and bottom. If you're beginning then it's okay, but you should focus on quality and not how many thing can I add to make it look cool.
ya man, being an editor myself I can tell you that Doc is pretty much nailed it. It doesnt matter how many effects you can throw into a clip, what matters is HOW you do it. IMO great flow in any edit wins my liking.