Too many different colors and chosen the worst colors to be in one place
Name in a bad place
Blending of colors is bad
Too much open space to the left
Has no feeling
Its just bad im sorry it is but atleast you tried i give you cred for that
Also i see what you trying to do, i like that just not doin a good job.
Try harder next time and know what everything your using does before working on a sig.