umm the render isnt shit at all man. its just his usage of the render that isnt really good. you have to know what your tlkn bout b4 you go sayin shit like that man. and dont go so harsh man, hes only a beginner. so ease up "Mr. I've Made Over 200 Sigs".
on-topic. try not to have your render to much on the one side. It'll leave the other side almost completely empty. Try not to use that colour, it sorta reminds me of poo lol. Try working on your spelling lol. but for a beginner its a decent effort. 5.5/10