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    new siggy......

    PLEASE HELP ME BY TELLING ME WHAT I CAN DO TO IMPOROVE!!!

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    dont put text in corners
    the c4d is to obvious and alone
    match color of text with sig
    needs more effects
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    It's alright but bad text

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    Work on lighting, text, and making to focal more attractive.

    There isn't really much of a light source and the general lighting pretty much the same.
    Try using levels, curves, and/or the combination of dodge and burn on it.

    The text should never be alone in the corner with a sorta-bright color that doesn't fit well with the sig.
    If you are determined to do that, at least take away the yellow and make it a single matching color.
    It's hard to explain how to improve it but it's something you get better at over time.

    Making the focal more attractive can be done with the effects you use and making it stand out more. You could bring him in a bit more left and use some smudges or perhaps a c4d. Anything to make him stand out more from the background.

    0_o Wrote more than I expected. xD




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    Quote Originally Posted by Whisper View Post
    Work on lighting, text, and making to focal more attractive.

    There isn't really much of a light source and the general lighting pretty much the same.
    Try using levels, curves, and/or the combination of dodge and burn on it.

    The text should never be alone in the corner with a sorta-bright color that doesn't fit well with the sig.
    If you are determined to do that, at least take away the yellow and make it a single matching color.
    It's hard to explain how to improve it but it's something you get better at over time.

    Making the focal more attractive can be done with the effects you use and making it stand out more. You could bring him in a bit more left and use some smudges or perhaps a c4d. Anything to make him stand out more from the background.

    0_o Wrote more than I expected. xD

    thanks man appreciate your typing
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    meh 5/10 .
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    i never had a gf -_-
    ^^Made by: Shayne^^
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    im guessing the text and lack of lighting and effects killed huh
    i want to learn some more ways to add effects and stuff.....
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    Okay man, straight up right now.
    Just use tutorials for a while to learn.
    It's how I got started..
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    Quote Originally Posted by moosicgawd View Post
    Okay man, straight up right now.
    Just use tutorials for a while to learn.
    It's how I got started..
    Is it really that bad
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    I don't want to kill your confidence but if its your first one and your still learning its a 10/10
    Quote Originally Posted by dk173 View Post
    i never had a gf -_-
    ^^Made by: Shayne^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by ShadowWrath View Post
    I don't want to kill your confidence but if its your first one and your still learning its a 10/10
    not first more like 3rd.... im gonna go read some tuts
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