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    Some of my art

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    some are very good, work on some lighting and depth and text
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    #1: Random colors, splits the flow, I dont really like it, or neither does it match the kind of colors needed for a space-type signature.

    #2: Very, very messy, and very, very sharpened. COuld use lighting on this signature, and apply just a tad bit of gaussian blur to it.

    #3: Gradient maps are a man's best friend, but use them correctly. Why is there red. It ruins it for me. Also, for all of your signatures, texts is a major factor. You might want to think about excluding it altogether.

    #4: No focal, messy signature, no flow at all. use the blur brush, and brush everyones faces, cept for the one you want to be the focal.

    #5 and #6: Clarify the text, the background also repeats itself, whether you used a brush or not. Get a longer render/stock that covers it all. I like the arrow, though, try a motion blur in the direction of the arrow.

    #7: I like this one. My favorite, out of everything here. I just dun like the green hints at the bottom of the cross.

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    some of them are very good
    some of them are very plain
    some of then i cant tell what they are really

    i don't like the size of them either

    #1
    nice effect how the colors make earth look like a comet
    the light doesn't make good flow from that direction
    7/10
    #2
    the text isn't very good (heh welcome to my world )
    looks sorta over sharpened
    and theirs not really a render
    6/10
    #3
    again the text isn't too good
    you should make text color match the sig color
    but i like mostly everything else
    7/10
    #4
    theirs 2 many effects over the render
    and the render takes up the whole sig which i don't like
    5/10
    #5 and 6
    my favorite of them it looks great for a text sig
    you could change the color however
    8/10
    #7
    its plainly to simple
    4/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by BPK View Post
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    Any proof to back that up?

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    what czar said

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    They are pretty good. The focals aren't defined enough, most are too messy, some concepts are promising, but not executed very well.

    You need to focus on getting basic tag making principles.

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    They are good but you can work on opicity lights and text,
    to all toghther i would give 7.7/10

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    3rd one is the best, all the others are bleh.


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    Ok im gonna go straight to point of negatives, ok firstly the text sucks on all of them, #2 has a nice fading light behind the text, but the text still sucks, ok the positive side is #1 i really love the colours but the text sucks bad font bad colour bad placement...6/10 for the lot, do keep practicing i'd love to see you improve...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Czar View Post


    Any proof to back that up?
    i got MY psd to back it up that I made it...

    Yea text has always been bad more me

    Quote Originally Posted by AirCuddles View Post
    #3: Gradient maps are a man's best friend, but use them correctly. Why is there red. It ruins it for me. Also, for all of your signatures, texts is a major factor. You might want to think about excluding it altogether.
    I didnt even notice the red dots until u pointed them out.

    and i guess i should point out that the 2nd one was supposed to not have a render

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    3rd one is my favorite out of ALL the others. Others are ok.


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