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    First Abstract

    Ok...this is my first abstract yes i know its huge but it looks awesome


    I got .PSD just ask!

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    Preety gud for ya First Abstract

    Ehh 9/10

    Gud colour choice n all.

    Just try 2 fix the text a bit

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    Text doesnt rlly suit.Try to make the text more ``space like``
    I know what tut you used..
    sb made the same thing a month ago, with the same tut, and it looked much better.

    7/10

    Rate my hitman sig.

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    stop saying rate my hitman and giving me crap ratings..and ok ill go to your hitman sig...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Make My Day View Post
    stop saying rate my hitman and giving me crap ratings..and ok ill go to your hitman sig...
    Crap ratings?
    It is my opinion.
    I just wanna know wut ppl think of my sig.
    And you really could do better.

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    mm I know the Tut you used for that.
    Lost it now, But I've used it.

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    See this is the reason your the 5 year old yourself, its my "FIRST" tut i know theres room for improvement but seriously...Ali g

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    I saw sb ``FIRST`` abstract work with the tut and it was better anyway..

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    MMD - Seriously, if you're gonna post here, you gotta take the comments and what they think of it. The main text is not that good + the sub text - the color doesn't flow with it. You're getting better, just work on your attitude.


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    I think you should take out the lens flare and seriously reconsider the text. The background is empty looks unfinished and plain. I mean it looks ok but taking into consideration you followed the tut to the letter it means you didn't really do anything on it yourself. When following tuts, use something different but follow the techniques used. What i'd do man is do it again and i'll work you through it over Teamviewer, i no it's hard to take the critism but better now then later. So drop me a PM if you want to do that.


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    It looks really cool,

    Text needs improvement.









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    i see tut on this abstract picture too but i never make it work cause i dont have PS in english and i am not that great in english
    My works


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    yah its ok. Try to vary tuts a bit more. I say leave out the text next time. But good work man.

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    i like it good colors.
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