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    ODST Burst

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    I think i like the text one better

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    its looks nice but the focal is to hard to see.

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    i tried for more attention on the explosion
    but yeah, had a hard time trying to keep him bright

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    Focal problems. Concentrate towards the render/stock more, instead of the explosion stuffs going on back there.

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    The trooper isn't too clear and could've been done a bit better.

    The one with the text is better btw.

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    Render isn't very noticable but very nice. Definately your best.

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    I don't like the fact it's one colour.

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    With Text is better.

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