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    A short story

    Never noticed this section... Dafuq

    So, anyways... On a Sunday a few months ago I woke up because of a friend who called me telling to go to a car show with him.. so, I woke up. I called a couple more friends and told them to come (my best mate and stoner bud) we met up at a small shopping centre and he pulled out a fat joint and I was like fuck yeah! He'd been Smoking/high for 2 days straight when I met up with him.
    Anyways, we smoked the joint behind the shops while deciding which way to go to this place. We finished the j and we were all fucked, we started to walk and we went past this wall and my friend decided to tag it with his name LOL... Next thing you know, some guy walks found the corner and me and my mates cousin stared at the guy walking towards us for like 2 minutes straight and then we realised that we should tell my friend.
    It was pretty funny but then he followed us for a while...
    About 10 minutes later we sat down again and rolled a couple more and lit them up. once we were finished, we began our hour walk to this place.. about half way there, this old guy (50-60) pulls up be t to us on his bike...
    This is the first thing he said "excuse me boys, but could you tell me where the fuck I fucking am" we took about a minute to reply because we were just like Wut..

    Any ways, I told him where he was and he literally said 'fuck' every 5 words... And then at the end he goes "sorry for the language but you guys probably use it all the fucking time"
    Then he left.
    We had no idea what just happened but we continued to walk on, the rest of the day we just got high and looked around..
    That's pretty much that :/

    Another time we got so high that we got scared of stars in the sky.. and another time where I felt like I was teleporting to different places in my house, and Id call my friends name and say "how the fuck did I get here?"

    That's a whole different story though..

    I also had a bad experience a few months ago that has actually had a long term effect on me.. might post it later





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    That's some pretty fucked up shiet. But that old guy is just amazing lol.

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    Quote Originally Posted by unsocial View Post
    That's some pretty fucked up shiet. But that old guy is just amazing lol.
    It was so fucking weird hahaha! we were walking on a probably 2km path but it was like a back path O.o





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    That's the kind of old person I wanna be.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post
    That's the kind of old person I wanna be.
    It didn't seem like it was natural to him though, I think that he was intimidated by us





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    Quote Originally Posted by Marceline View Post


    It didn't seem like it was natural to him though, I think that he was intimidated by us
    ​"Oh look, a rowdy band of street-hooligans. I better speak their language to avoid confrontation".
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post

    ​"Oh look, a rowdy band of street-hooligans. I better speak their language to avoid confrontation".
    You'd understand if you were there at the time. He forced the words to come out and he did so way to frequently


    edit: it was also on a one way path that went for about 2-3 k's there was no way around us, it was in a sort of dead area too where no one really goes.
    Last edited by HalfBajan; 08-13-2013 at 05:09 AM.





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    George Carlin? Is that you?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Azathᴏth View Post
    George Carlin? Is that you?
    who dat? O.o





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    Quote Originally Posted by Marceline View Post


    who dat? O.o
    A comedian. Google him.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Azathᴏth View Post


    A comedian. Google him.
    Just did





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    Sounds like a really fucked up day you had, but pretty funny too ! haha

    - One time me and my friends got scared of the chairs we were sitting on because it felt like we was flying in the air on the way to the moon haha amazing shiit xD

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