You have lots of random scenes where not much excitement happens. And try not to do this " Kill someone | Cut | Kill someone | Cut " You do a kill or two and just cut to the next scene where you kill someone, hope that somewhat makes sense. It get's boring after seeing the same thing over and over try adding something exciting into the video like cool edits and special effects or 360 kills or triple headshots or something like that. It gets kinda boring after the first minutes or so it kinda repeats its self but one thing that I do like about your video its HD! Don't take it too bad but Id give it a 2 out 5.