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    1st time montage legit plays xD

    This is my first time making a montage so be nice but Some constructive criticism

    tell me what you think of it

    subscribe if you like the vid xD


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    man this is good for a first montage btw tae yang is good nice lol!.8/10 but hetres some stuff u need to add
    -sony vegas editing or with w/e
    -mor acolades
    -more running
    xD those give more excitement to watch ur montage.






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    K thanks alot or that ima making a second montage and i'll consider that

    trying to get those ultra kills in>.< but its tuff to do so

    and with sony vegas which i am using i tried the slow down zoom in thing
    bbut yer ill improve on that thanks xD

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    no prob hope u do good and sucess on ur new montage!






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    Introduction, sexy.
    Song, i love it aha!
    Techno Tae Yang - Look At Me?
    Props for using such a song,

    Nice accolades, just a tip, when you slow mo things.
    Don't slow mo everything, just a second or two before the kill,
    Make sure you don't slow it down that much to be honest.
    Especially with that techno beat, going pretty fast.
    It'll seem like your video is slow.

    Don't really worry about haters, edit your videos like you would want them.
    A video will turn out good, if you think it will.

    Gameplay 8/10
    Song 9.5/10
    Editing 8/10
    Last edited by Shocking; 04-05-2010 at 04:57 PM.

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    Ehh, i'd give you a 6/10
    Problems with this montage:
    -Pretty much a majority of these clips were from 1-3 game(s), try mixing it up, add more games from other maps,
    -Snipers only on Junk Flea doesn't count as a Montage, more of a minitage, try othe rmaps + game types.
    -Too many zoom effects in the beginning,
    -Tae Yang makes great songs, i gotta say, but not for montages sadly.
    -Less zoom, more flash, but not too much flash.
    -Try to kill the dead time ( You just running around for a while without killing )
    -Try to clip the kills starting with 1/2 of your Multi Kills + in the beginning, and the highest accolade you got
    Ultra Kill + at the end


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    Just because his music choice isn't the same as yours! *poke
    Just keep editing, sometimes when you start using slowmo editing,
    You lose track of the actual video time and it gets sloppy.
    When you zoom in, also try to be creative with it, relate it to the song beat or something.

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    Looks like you have no spread.

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    yeah it does look like that man... ur gun never moved up and down lol! but tae yang look at me =just pwnage nice taste






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    Honlestly it was a good montage i liked it.

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    It is good for a 1st montage but he should add effects acolades and more running as i said.






    I like Flengo <3.

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    Excellent first montage

    - Very Nice, Neat, Sexy Intro
    - Good Song
    - Pretty good accolades
    - Nice Shots

    But here are a few things you could work on
    - Make Slow-Mo not as long
    - A bit more running
    - Don't show yourself getting killed
    - Add a few maps into it not just one

    And that's all

    I would give you about a

    8/10

    Well done and welcome to MPGH.

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    yeaps 8/10 also for me and welcome to MPGH!?






    I like Flengo <3.

    Mc565 isn't even good at ca men.

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    Yeah welcome to Mpgh...

    Mpgh has cookies join us!

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    May i ask that which program is the best to record it? I used some program but when i transfer it to be a flim, it's jerking like crazy... Thx first.

    P/S: sorry about my bad English

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