Gourav's. He said he was going to make me a cake. oh, he's back..NAKED! WTF r u doi-
Not bad. You should start doing this more often. I loved the beginning. Very nice beats. Maybe in the rap parts, don't want to sound mean or bad or whatever, but you seem so... " dead", like you're just reading a text you know? It is great and I really like it, but with the rap parts you sound so... strange. But for the rest it is very good. The lyrics are great too.
EDIT: Just read that this is the first time that you sang a song. To be honest that is actually amazing for a first time. Keep it up!
Last edited by Chubs' Cholo; 05-16-2015 at 05:51 AM.