You did a little over editing! too much color correction and the inventory part sucks kinda cuz no1 can actually see yours guns lol
ill rate it 5 put of 10, but dont worry dude, ull get better at this im sure, GL for future projects
looking at u rank u should know that i the last few seconds when killing the 3 bosses u could go down there and kill them hs takes only 5-10 bullets instead of a whole clip so aim head next time aha :P not bad video quality is a bit bad but i suppose okai over all
The video quality could be better, and you should have edited out your fails. And when you're showing people your inventory slow down and actually let users view it. And when you're adding text try to make it look more professional, the font that you used looks really low quality and really doesn't fit with what you're trying to present. Overall I would rate it 4/10 but this is most likely your first video, so its actually pretty good.