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    Help anyone? please Its a done essay I think there are no mistakes but I cant trust myself.

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    What exactly are we "critiquing" if we agree to this? Language, grammar, spelling? Orrrr?


    Forfeit the game, before somebody
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    And puts your name to shame
    Cover up your face, you can't
    run the race the pace is too fast
    You just won't last.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sTaXx View Post
    What exactly are we "critiquing" if we agree to this? Language, grammar, spelling? Orrrr?
    All that
    Plus the rules are i can not use "I" and "You" in the essay and I handle the with weird wording so i am a little concerned.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stewie_Griffin View Post
    All that
    Plus the rules are i can not use "I" and "You" in the essay and I handle the with weird wording so i am a little concerned.
    Lol. That's obvious. Can't be written in first person.
    Aight, I'll take a crack at it for ya.


    Forfeit the game, before somebody
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    run the race the pace is too fast
    You just won't last.

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    Pm me essay.

    I wanna see.
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    dude screw writing essays buy one off em sites endastory.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    dude screw writing essays buy one off em sites endastory.
    I am in English 101 next quarter I'll be in 235 I want to be ready and not rely on a outside source. Plus when it comes to writing resume its just you by yourself, you can't buy one or when writing essay to enter a university in my case its University of Washington.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stewie_Griffin View Post
    I am in English 101 next quarter I'll be in 235 I want to be ready and not rely on a outside source. Plus when it comes to writing resume its just you by yourself, you can't buy one or when writing essay to enter a university in my case its University of Washington.
    Congratz smart dude.
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