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    Thumbs up My First Thread Design & First Time Using Photoshop [Need Feedback]

    Hello, I've been fascinated with some of the thread designs people make on here, so I downloaded Photoshop CC, and here I am. I've created my first Thread Design, and really need constructive feedback. This is based on an Amazon Refund/DD Service. Thank you, and if you have any tips or tricks to share, go ahead.

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    I can't really see the meaning of these background pics, I think that they should be somehow related to you or what you do, maybe its your style, but overall looks calm and presentable, maybe you should try different font idk.

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    Quote Originally Posted by UKrefund View Post
    I can't really see the meaning of these background pics, I think that they should be somehow related to you or what you do, maybe its your style, but overall looks calm and presentable, maybe you should try different font idk.
    Interesting, I did think the font was overkill, and the background pics were to add something out than just yellow/green. Thanks so much for your feedback!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCoded View Post
    Interesting, I did think the font was overkill, and the background pics were to add something out than just yellow/green. Thanks so much for your feedback!
    For the first thread it's realy not bad. Only one person's thoughts so don't mind it much.
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    Quote Originally Posted by xCoded View Post
    Interesting, I did think the font was overkill, and the background pics were to add something out than just yellow/green. Thanks so much for your feedback!
    Quote Originally Posted by UKrefund View Post
    For the first thread it's realy not bad. Only one person's thoughts so don't mind it much.
    Regarding fonts: I think that this brush font seems out of place too. Perhaps replace it with the font used in the About Us section and then use a thinner/lighter one for that section.
    Anyway, I also think that the green doesn't really match well with the black and yellow theme and it jars with other elements like the mail icon in the footer (which was most likely meant for a white design).
    Overall there's room for improvement for how you place and space things but you'll get a hang of it the more you design. Generally I think the design is a little to big and customers might be overwhelmed by the size.
    In this example I think it would make sense to use that amazon orange instead of the yellow just for the sake of consistency and comprehension.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gimleey View Post
    Regarding fonts: I think that this brush font seems out of place too. Perhaps replace it with the font used in the About Us section and then use a thinner/lighter one for that section.
    Anyway, I also think that the green doesn't really match well with the black and yellow theme and it jars with other elements like the mail icon in the footer (which was most likely meant for a white design).
    Overall there's room for improvement for how you place and space things but you'll get a hang of it the more you design. Generally I think the design is a little to big and customers might be overwhelmed by the size.
    In this example I think it would make sense to use that amazon orange instead of the yellow just for the sake of consistency and comprehension.
    Ahhh, thank you so much for the help!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCoded View Post
    Ahhh, thank you so much for the help!
    np mate

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    I think the font doesn't fit in this design tbh.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ace View Post
    I think the font doesn't fit in this design tbh.
    Good Luck!
    Damn, I suck with fonts... xD Thanks for the feedback!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCoded View Post
    Damn, I suck with fonts... xD Thanks for the feedback!
    No problem, keep learning and you will be a pro if you wanted...
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    Considering it was your first, It looks pretty sick. You can try finding some easy tutorials on Youtube, there a bunch load there that you could find.



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    Quote Originally Posted by TheBenefactor View Post
    Considering it was your first, It looks pretty sick. You can try finding some easy tutorials on Youtube, there a bunch load there that you could find.
    Yeah, I saw about 1 or 2 tutorials and thought I would give it a go. Thank you very much for the feedback!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCoded View Post
    Yeah, I saw about 1 or 2 tutorials and thought I would give it a go. Thank you very much for the feedback!
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    its good, use other font please.

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    Other than the font, it is pretty decent...
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