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    Question Need your advice first sig in 4 years

    ok so i haven't touched photoshop in 4-5 years so i downloaded it a few hours ago and i did this in like 30 minutes anyway, i need your advices to know what do i have to work on to get better. I feel like i have some problems to blend the render to the signature?
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    I think the only problem is the text, I believe it is very dull. You should probably change that to a brighter text to pop out through the bright orange, other than this, great job dude.

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    The background is nice, but it's too flat for the stock. Try and blend him in more and add a light source and work the focal point, so our eyes don't wander across the signature. Change the text, and blend it in more.

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    Make the text stand out more. Maybe add lens flare, just because it's awesome.

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    Like some others said I think the text could use a little more attention it kind of looks like an after thought.
    I really liked the flames and the curved lines in the background, were they made or pictures that you found?
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    The text needs to stand out more.
    Also, I would get rid of that outline if I were you.



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    Quote Originally Posted by bloonpop View Post
    The text needs to stand out more.
    Also, I would get rid of that outline if I were you.
    I think the outline is fine, but the fire background is a bit generic, the text is underpronounced and especially you're using papyrus...one of the most generic fonts ever made.

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    Awesome job! Much better than I could do lol

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