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    Gigux

    Rap battle me right now. spit me something

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    Im about to put you down to shame
    you and your imaginary 'rap game'
    With your dont give a fuck bullshit I can tell your a poser
    with supid ass rhymes like that you deserve to get haullered
    so whats it gonna be?, "oh I dont give a fuck ill do it later?"
    Better watch the fuck out next time you get an unknown caller
    or better yet go up and change the name to MC master
    cause its me, im a fucking black potato
    you got me up and switched my lyrical skills to "enable"
    Ill knock you down to the moon faster than the fucking appolo
    your so bad you just got owned by a vegetable

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    Fuck you @BlackPotato
    after this diss ur a red tomato
    oh,I'm not a poser
    I'm tellin u get closer
    are you scared?
    I can tell you you're not prepared
    Prepared to feel my hate
    easy to tell you're not straight
    with that vegetable name
    trying to get fame
    trying to be in the rap game


    Oh, I still dont give a fuck
    you're like your mom, you suck
    You dont have skills
    ur probably a drug addict eating sleeping pills
    beating me is like climbing up a steep hill
    I'm gonna take you down
    diss me and next time i'll bring the whole town
    FUCKING CLOWN
    Last edited by GiGux; 10-16-2011 at 02:35 PM.

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    fuck you giftedpotato, after this your a red tomato?
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    fucked up wannabe raper thinking yo cool
    copyin them rhymes from www.rapsforfools
    ill choke you with a necklace off of your own fucking barstool
    then rewind time and beat you with my propipe
    it has 2 words on it ''kill bitches''
    thats why you were number one on my hitlist
    didnt even have to hire a guy to do it
    just stuff yo mama in my trunk then drive off without a permit
    when they ask who I say GiGux did it
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    ps: try to elaborate. dont rhyme for 2 phrases then switch and switch. oh and also flow a little

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    I'm the king
    here to win
    you're easy to kill
    coz my rhyme's are so ill
    dont worry it aint a crime to take a pill
    it just would be a quicker death
    you fool
    you're not a real threat
    i'm so fucking cool
    cool as ice
    I'm gonna say it twice
    fuck you blackpotato
    i'm gonna smash you like a tomato
    you all veggies are the same
    fucking lame & old
    and I know its cold
    but PotatoKiller is the title im trying to claim


    ps: ur pretty good
    @BlackPotato
    Last edited by GiGux; 10-16-2011 at 03:41 PM.

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    a little better, nice addition at the end
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    I see we've stepped into round 3, 3rd times the charm
    ill murder your whole family without any harm
    attract each of em into certain death with my natural charms
    But dont be scared, just check your windows and lock your car
    cause one day they could be sittin dead on your yard
    youll ask what the fuck did I do to deserve this?
    terrible rapping, your so bad its priceless
    cant even put a price to your name, but ive got one mil on your fucking rap game
    so move to another country, and give yourself another name
    cause im after you, "ThePotatoOfPain"

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    Round three
    cant you see
    I'm already "killing spree"
    I dont give a fuck what you do to my family
    fuck my mom fuck my dad
    I dont give a fuck, it wont make me sad
    but your lyrics are just bad
    so Im getting mad
    "The Potato Of Pain"
    Heres a new name
    "The potato who's lame"
    this is your last day,
    to walk on earth
    so pray
    and you get a chance to rebirth


    ps: Midnight here, so I might go to sleep, but keep spitting
    .....I got bad flow

    @BlackPotato
    Last edited by GiGux; 10-16-2011 at 04:20 PM.

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    Round three, cant you see
    Im already on a killing spree
    I dont give a fuck about what you do to my family
    fuck my mom, fuck my dad
    I dont give a fuck it wont make me sad
    but your lyrics are just bad
    The Potato Of Pain?
    Heres a new name, the potato of lame
    this is your last day
    to walk on this earth
    so pray and u might have a chance to rebirth

    Put your small phrases and make them into bigger ones. Also try to stick to a subject. ex: fuck my mom, fuck my dad. I dont give a fk it wont make me sad - but your lyrics are just bad. Do this. I dont give a fk it wont make me sad, without them im living the emcee life youll never have. you try and copy me, but your lyrics are just bad. your so pathetic your starting to get me mad.
    Go with the flow, dont try too hard too rhyme but make the sentences go together correctly. example:

    ill choke you with a necklace off of your own fucking barstool
    then rewind time and beat you with my propipe
    it has 2 words on it ''kill bitches''
    thats why you were number one on my hitlist

    I didn't rhyme pipe and bitches. you dont have to rhyme everything with the same end words like kill ill thrill. also bitches and hitlist dont have the same ending words but they still ended up working together. if you both say these words out loud they kinda rhyme and still keep flow going. dont write different attacks every two lines either. try to stick your diss together kinds like a story. just dont go off subject alot. Now I g2g, use these tips but dont force em onto you.

    your rap with these things:

    Weve arrived to round 3, but you cant even see
    Im already on a fucking killing spree
    I dont give a fuck what you do to my family, mom and dad
    Without them im still living the emcee life you never had
    you try to be like me, but your rhymes are plain ol' bad
    youre so pathetic youve gotten me mad
    You tryin to scare me with "thepotatoofpain?"
    might as well call yourself "thepotatoofshame"
    This is your last day to walk on earth
    So pray on your knees and hope you get a chance to rebirth.
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    You dont nessesarly suck, you just dont use your talents right. now how bout you use them tips and spit me another verse!
    Last edited by BlackPotato; 10-16-2011 at 04:30 PM.

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    just spit another rhyme, I wanna see if youve improved

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    I give up, you won.
    Thanks for the AWESOME TIPS, I got it..
    I'll "practice" more



    Respect for u man and sorry for being a dick
    Last edited by GiGux; 10-16-2011 at 04:40 PM.

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    GiG you need more metaphors and style, and flow

    Good job to both
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    no problemo

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    thanks

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