Is that your final entry? Remove those blue lines, fugly. And are you against or with Kero, because I'm pretty sure he'd bitchslap that tag like a pro.
That tag is pretty dope. Some lines look whack but overall it adds another colour to the piece which is needed. I haven't any tag from kero which I've overly liked, no offence to him coz I know he's learning just like everyone else.